Monday, October 5, 2009

A Second Attempt


I felt like I had to have another go at this one, it has a little more definition and contrast. I'm just a little happier to send this off to the client. Any thoughts?

14 comments:

Mommy with Crayons said...

I think I like the first one better, but I'm not sure why. Maybe because it's softer and women tend to like themselves pictured in a softer form? OR maybe it's just me. They are both amazing. It's incredible that you do this with pen.

Munich Newman said...

She should be delighted, assuming of course that she looks like the sketch.
You're the man.

Larry said...

agreed...I like the bolder lines in the hair and garment.

Chad Wallace said...

I like the new one... More definition, and life in the eyes.

Arti said...

Technically second one is better but I think she would'v been happier with first -- for the simple reason that she looks younger and more radient in it!( Women!)........

Anthony Duce said...

I like the first one better.

Sheila said...

yes ! Her eyes pop and sparkle in this rendition. Well done!

Stephen Gardner said...

Seems to be something of a split decision here. I only sent in the second drawing and they gave me a laundry list of alterations,I'd post it again but that is milking it to death. I'm glad to hear all of your opinions though. Thanks all.

Art with Liz said...

Also love this one - and would love to know what they would want to alter on it!!

Pyracantha said...

In the second one, she has has another cup of coffee.

Pyracantha said...

has HAD another cup that is

Stephen Gardner said...

I'm still working on this one, I think I'll post it again after today depending on what else I'm asked to change.

Munich Newman said...

Is the first one a greyscale (sorry, grayscale) scan whereas the second one is RGB or CMYK?

Stephen Gardner said...

I don't think they are different in that way but I can tell you the saga continues and i will be posting another version next week.